tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7383322099457754397.post1520947154609638211..comments2023-12-11T02:29:36.539-08:00Comments on Black-Listed Magazine: BREAKDOWNS REALLY by Ford DagenhamBlack-Listed Magazinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16926221066405665935noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7383322099457754397.post-69915719250537868272014-08-15T07:52:29.346-07:002014-08-15T07:52:29.346-07:00I like this poem. The para-taxis is wonderful: the...I like this poem. The para-taxis is wonderful: the piling on of great details with the "and" and "under."<br />I was pulled in and smile at how much I related to the poem. Joseph Hargraves Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com