the steam pipe choir ensemble of dirty birds and the filthy word of joy by Mat Gould

the lady next to me
smells
like
a wet hound dogs blanket of stale straw
and tells me
she got ran over
in
a Wal-Mart parking lot
and
thus her broken leg
she
is
breathing
as if there has been a forest fire burning in her lungs
all throughout
the rainy season
and
her nostrils lend no exhaust
she is checking over medical bills
making
sure
everyone has gotten paid
and
looks into her bank account
with
the sleekest
of
a mumble
-like most of us
or
certainly myself indeed-
has
acquired the lust
for
a
steady chorus of fuck
said
with
the ease and finesse
of
the morning birds
prodding
us
back toward
existence
like
an engine on full fire-

2 comments:

  1. why the staggered line breaks? it's not cool. it's not edgy. it's annoying. what's the point of it? honestly ask yourself why. are you on a train? is that it? are you writing during an earthquake? are your hands jittery, and is that why you decided to
    break up
    the lines all awk-
    wardly and with no sense or any kind
    of pattern just
    random line
    breaks
    for the
    sake
    of what? aesthetics? do you really think
    this look
    s prettier
    in any way or that it adds to any
    thing? no. it's fuck
    king stupid
    and
    over-played
    already. don't you want to be unique?
    don't
    you
    want
    for once
    in your life
    to
    overhear
    people talking
    about you and saying you know what that mat gould guy was
    one
    clever sonofawhore? for the love of god,
    aren't
    you
    getting
    bored
    already?!?

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  2. I would certainly bust your ass in public jes for being anonymous, beyond that...you are a dickless pedophile of your own child-

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